Showing posts with label Dorfman scripts. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Dorfman scripts. Show all posts

Monday, June 6, 2022

The Fawcett Movie Adaptation Writers

Otto Binder wrote three of Fawcett's 35 movie comics issues; the series started off written by Joe Millard and then became Leo Dorfman's most notable assignment there.

Here's a page from "Code of the Silver Sage" with Rocky Lane (Motion Picture Comics 102). The clues to lead to Leo Dorfman are "As" and "Just then" in the captions, but the clincher is the use of periods--all of these not exclusive to Dorfman, but used by him much more often than the other writers at Fawcett at the time. "Ivanhoe" and "The Red Badge of Courage" are, as I never tire of pointing out, the "classics in comics" mentioned in an early 70s Superboy text page and taken by fandom at the time as meaning Classics Illustrated.
 
Motion Picture Comics 101

Writers--
Fawcett movie one-shots


1949   Dakota Lil Joe Millard
1950   Copper Canyon Millard

  Destination Moon Otto Binder

  Montana Millard

  Pioneer Marshal Millard
  Powder River Rustlers Millard
  Singing Guns Millard

Fawcett Movie Comic


1950 Gunmen of Abilene Binder
Dec/     King of the Bull Whip Leo Dorfman
Feb/51
The Old Frontier Dorfman
Apr/    
10  The Missourians Dorfman
May/    
11  The Thundering Trail Dorfman
Aug/     12  Rustlers on Horseback Dorfman
Oct/     13  Warpath Dorfman
Dec/     14  The Last Oupost Dorfman
Feb/52 15  The Man from Planet X Binder
Apr/    
16  Ten Tall Men Dorfman
June/     17  Rose of Cimarron Dorfman
Aug/    
18  The Brigand Dorfman
Oct/     19  Carbine Williams Dorfman
Dec/     20  Ivanhoe Dorfman

Motion Picture
Comics


1950 101  The Vanishing Westerner Millard
Jan/51 102  Code of the Silver Sage Dorfman
Mar/    
103  Covered Wagon Raid
Dorfman
May/    
104  Vigilante Hideout Dorfman
July/    
105  The Red Badge of Courage
Dorfman
Sep/     106  The Texas Rangers
Dorfman
Nov/     107  Frisco Tornado
Dorfman
Jan/52  108  Mask of the Avenger
Dorfman
Mar/     109  Rough Riders of Durango
Dorfman
May/    
110  When Worlds Collide
Dorfman
July/     111  The Vanishing Outpost
Dorfman
Sep/    
112  Brave Warrior
Dorfman
Nov/     113  Walk East on Beacon Dorfman
Jan/53  114  Cripple Creek Dorfman

Wednesday, April 14, 2021

Weisbecker and Riss at the Movies

The Missourians

Note the distinctive long, square faces in Fawcett's adaptation of the movie "The Missourians."

Somewhere along the line, Clem Weisbecker and Bob Butts have had some work conflated at early Fifties Fawcett, making it difficult to sort out their stories going by their credits in the Who's Who. I finally took a long look at their credited Forties stories at other companies. I believe I can follow the progression of Clem Weisbecker's style on the Black Hood and such to the Fawcett artist with those distinctive faces.

Butts is given "Copper Canyon" in the Who's Who, which is the main point of confusion here, but the actual penciller is Weisbecker. The style matches that on Jackie Robinson at Fawcett at the same time, which the WW gives to Weisbecker and not Butts.

The other problem with "Copper Canyon" is that it's also been attributed entirely to Sheldon Moldoff. I can accept that Moldoff inked it. "Pioneer Marshall" and "The Missourians" are also supposedly entirely by Moldoff, but the inking on those two doesn't overwhelm the Weisbecker pencils.

The Thundering Trail

In many cases on the Fawcett movie adaptations the inker did a lot of the heavy lifting on likenesses. Some didn't. Thus, Pete Riss's issues vary wildly as far as that "overwhelming the pencils" goes; on "Dakota Lil" you have to look twice to find Riss, but on "The Thundering Trail," as seen here, he's easier to spot (although it's been attributed to Stan Campbell).

movie one-shots at Fawcett


1949 nn  Dakota Lil w: Joe Millard p: Pete Riss
1950 nn  Copper Canyon w: Millard  p: Clem Weisbecker
 i: Sheldon Moldoff
1950 nn  Pioneer Marshall w: Millard  p: Weisbecker
 i: Moldoff?
1950 nn  Powder River Rustlers w: Millard  p: Riss

Fawcett Movie Comic

Apr/51 #10  The Missourians w: Leo Dorfman  p: Weisbecker
 i: Moldoff?
May/     #11  The Thundering Trail w: Dorfman  p: Riss

Motion Picture Comics

Nov/51 #107  Frisco Tornado w: Dorfman  p: Riss

Friday, October 25, 2019

Leo Dorfman's Four-Color Classics

Now that I've seen all the Four-Color movie issues, I believe this is close to a full listing of Leo Dorfman's scripts on them--a handful out of the grand total of over a hundred produced by Western before the numbering ended in 1962. (I don't find any Dorfman movie comics after the switchover to Gold Key.)

The Boy and the Pirates
These tiers from "The Boy and the Pirates" (art by Tom Gill) showcase a typical Dorfman caption: In the next frightening moment... and the like. In this issue he uses Just then... a couple of times, and a number of captions beginning with As.

I've mentioned before how an early-Seventies Murray Boltinoff letters page referred to "The Vikings" and others as "classics in comics," instantly leading fandom to conclude that Dorfman had written for Gilberton when it was Western and Fawcett he did movie adaptations for.

Leo Dorfman scripts on
Movie Four-Colors

Jun/56 709  The Searchers
Sep/     741  The Fastest Gun Alive
Jan/57 762  The Sharkfighters
Jul/     815  Dragoon Wells Massacre
Sep/     831  No Sleep Till Dawn
Jun/58 910  The Vikings
Jun/60 1117  The Boy and the Pirates
Jun/     1118  The Sword and the Dragon
Oct/     1148  I Aim at the Stars

Thursday, September 20, 2018

Some Leo Dorfman TV Westerns

Here's Day 1 of Freshman Intro to Logic illustrated again: Otto Binder is known to have written Broken Arrow; Four Color 947 is an issue of Broken Arrow; therefore Otto Binder wrote Four Color 947. Shakespeare wrote plays; Hamilton is a play; therefore Shakespeare wrote Hamilton.

Short moments later...
Although at this point Leo Dorfman has yet to use the caption structure "In the next agonizing moment..." as heavily as he will in the Sixties, he's leading up to it with "Short moments later..."; these tiers are from his first issues of the respective titles below, with the stories "Vengeance Trail," "Last of the Buffalo," and  "The Maverick."

Another Dorfman clue is variations of "Eeeyowww" and "Yowww," whereas Paul S. Newman mostly sticks to a succint "Oww!" In Binder's Broken Arrow issue we find an "Ukkk!"

BROKEN ARROW

Nov/57 #855  Apache Dowry Otto Binder

Kingdom of Terror Binder
Nov/58 #947  Desert Ordeal Leo Dorfman

Vengeance Trail Dorfman

Trackdown Dorfman

CHEYENNE written by Leo Dorfman
(other issues written by Paul S. Newman)

May-July/58 #7  The Mustang Trail

Last of the Buffalo
Aug-Oct/     #8  Devil's Canyon

The Conspirators
Nov-Jan/59  #9  Manhunt

Trouble in Peace Valley
Feb-Apr/      #10  Gunpowder Pass

The Ghost Trail
May-July/     #11  The Rio Smugglers

The Crooked Circle

GUNSMOKE written by Dorfman
(other Dell and Gold Key issues written by Newman)

Feb-Mar/58 #7  Showdown

The Maverick
Apr-May/     #8  The Taming of Bull Halloran

Six-Gun Fury
June-July/     #9  Man Without a Gun

The Bounty Hunter
Aug-Sep/      #10  The Deadly Dude

Badge of Honor

Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Leo Dorfman, Total Warlord of M.A.R.S.

Leo Dorfman wrote the entire run of Gold Key's Total War/M.A.R.S. Patrol Total War. (M.A.R.S. is the Marine Attack Rescue Service, a four-man team vital in the fight against invaders on America soil).

Wally Wood has gotten the attribution for writing the first three issues, just as Jack Cole has for all his Plastic Man stories, but with no better reason than that he wrote some of his own work elsewhere. Could Wood have brought the concept and plots to Gold Key? Very possible, but who can say? The "new writer" finally identifies the invaders as extraterrestrials, which supposedly proves a point, but he doesn't do it in issue 4, the first with the new artists; he works his way up to confirming the fact in #5.

Here are tiers from issues 3, 4, and 9. Do you notice a similarity in writing style? There's also Dorfman's use of captions beginning with "As" quite a bit, and at least one siren going "Howeee."

3--In the next hair-raising moment... 4--But in the next desperate instant... 9--In the next catastrophic moment...

I'm not sure exactly how the Wood/Adkins art was broken down: if one did layouts, one complete pencils, one complete inks; or more likely nothing so clearcut. And of course others may have helped. The inks on the remaining issues seem to me to match up with Mike Peppe's on, say, Mike Sekowsky's pencils on Man from U.N.C.L.E. Most often Roy and Peppe worked as a team, like Andru and Esposito—but the only signature in the series, on the splash page of #10, is Roy's alone.

Total War written by Leo Dorfman

July/65 Target: America a: Wally Wood & Dan Adkins
Oct/     Sneak Attack a: Wood & Adkins
Breakthrough a: Wood & Adkins

M.A.R.S. Patrol Total War written by Dorfman

Sept/66 Operation Copperhead a: Wood & Adkins
Oct/67 Operation Deep-Freeze p: Mike Roy  i: Mike Peppe
May/68 Mystery Beachhead p: Roy  i: Peppe
Aug/     Operation Snake-in-the-Brass p: Roy  i: Peppe
Nov/     The Death Wind p: Roy  i: Peppe
Feb/69 Tomorrow Is Doomsday p: Roy  i: Peppe
May/     City under Fire p: Roy  i: Peppe
Aug/     10  The Dragon's Teeth p: Roy  i: Peppe?

Tuesday, July 23, 2013

What's He Doing at Fawcett?

Fawcett's Motion Picture Comics 109 (March/52) presents "Rough Riders of Durango," a Rocky Lane movie. (The comic's numbering began with 101.) A number of these movie adaptations featured the Western stars who already had ongoing series in Fawcett comic books, but the movie tie-ins didn't often (if at all) use the creative teams from the stars' own books. In fact, on "Rough Riders of Durango" I see an artist not known to have worked at Fawcett at all.

Motion Picture Comics 109 page

On the full page, I can discern this artist's style most easily in the first and last panels. I find another couple of panels with close-ups (from different pages), even more recognizable.

Motion Picture Comics 109 panels

At Atlas, Werner Roth drew the Apache Kid series from 1950 to 1956, and returned to the genre with a few stories of Kid Colt and Gunhawk around 1970.

The full page above also gives a few clues to the writer, with "Anxious moments later" and "Just then" in captions. It's Leo Dorfman. When Dorfman returned to writing Superman's Pal Jimmy Olsen in the early Seventies, editor Murray Boltinoff confused indexers by mentioning that Dorfman had written, among others, the "classics in comics" Ivanhoe and The Red Badge of Courage. He meant nothing more than what he put down, uncapitalized, but fans assumed he meant "Classics Comics" and for many years attributed the Gilberton adaptations of those novels to Dorfman (see the paper first edition of the Who's Who). Ivanhoe and Red Badge were Fawcett Movie Comic and Motion Picture Comics issues by Dorfman, as we know now; two other "classics" mentioned by Boltinoff were Dell Movie Classics written by Dorfman later in the Fifties.

Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Twilight Zone 16-20 Writers

These are my IDs of the writers of most of the stories in the next five issues of Gold Key's Twilight Zone. "TZ 2" and "TZ 3" did earlier stories ("TZ 1" didn't write any more stories that I've seen, after the earliest issues); I can't put names to them.

I defer to the Grand Comics Database for the art attributions—except for the Jerry Grandenetti pencils credited to ghost-employer Joe Orlando. "Nightmare for an Astronaut," "The Man Who Mastered Yoga" (one of its panels is shown here), and "The Plague" were pencilled by Grandenetti. Orlando merely inked them. Orlando did pencil "The Masquerader."
TZ 19 panel: pencils by Grandenetti, inks by Orlando

The Twilight Zone 16-20 Writers

July/66#16 Nightmare for an AstronautDick Wood
The Ghost Gunner"TZ 3"
The Wisdom of the Beast *"TZ 2"
The Perfect CriminalLeo Dorfman
When the Ball Is OverPaul S. Newman
Sept/66#17 The MasqueraderDorfman
Once upon a Dream"TZ 3"
He Walked on Water *"TZ 2"
The Ship That Knew *"TZ 3"
Crystal Clear"TZ 3"
Mars: Dead or AliveWood
Nov/66#18 Second-Hand ClothesDorfman?
When the Lights Go OutDorfman
Dead Man's Train *"TZ 3"?
The Man in the Green Coat *"TZ 3"?
Programmed VacationWood
The ImpressionistWood?
Strange Reunion *Dorfman
Jan/67#19 The Crime-a-Day TownWood
Into Worlds Beyond"TZ 3"
Big-Foot *"TZ 3"?
The Man Who Mastered Yoga     ?
Our Man on Planet ErgoWood
Mar/67#20 The PlagueDorfman
The ProdigyDorfman
The Day That Couldn't Get Lost     ?
The PortalDorfman
* (single-page stories)

Monday, January 23, 2012

Twilight Zone 11-15 Writers

"Way Out West—On Mars" in Gold Key's Twilight Zone 13 lifts the plot of Ray Bradbury's short story "Mars Is Heaven!"

TZ 13 'Way Out West--On Mars' tiers: 'The four from Earth move forward...into a realm that should be 35 million miles away...'

The art attributions are on the Grand Comics Database. I don't see myself how Reed Crandall's art looks any different on "Way Out West" than on any other story he inked himself; naming Alden McWilliams as inker strikes me as way out of left field. And "Moment of Decision," as I said last week, is pencilled by Jerry Grandenetti, inked by Bill Draut and Joe Orlando.

"TZ 3" is a writer who will show up in later TZ issues and in Boris Karloff Tales of Mystery on more four-page "strange but true" stories.

The Twilight Zone 11-15 Writers

May/65#11 The GremlinsDick Wood
The Island VisionWood
The Wanted One *Wood
(Wanted...Alive!) Doomsday in DustervilleWood
Ghost Ship of the SkiesWood
The Vision *Wood
Aug/65#12 The Shadow with ClawsLeo Dorfman
The Revolt of the MachinesDorfman
The Voice in the Mist *Dorfman
They Dwell among UsDorfman
Nov/65#13 The Man Who Could Read the FutureWood
The Man with My FaceWood
Way Out West—On MarsWood
Feb/66#14 The Day That VanishedWood
The Death Car"TZ 3"
The Lost GeniusWood
The Lost OasisDorfman
A Nightmare Tale *     ?
May/66#15 Moment of DecisionWood
Wipe Out the FuturePaul S. Newman
The Wheel of Light *Dorfman
Perfect PreservationWood
The Vision of MystirDorfman
The Prophet *     ?
(* single-page stories)

Leo Dorfman names a character Mystir at least one more time: in "The Voodoo Doom of Superman" in Action Comics 413 (June/72)--a story for which he was credited only in the letter column in 417.

Monday, January 9, 2012

Twilight Zone (Dell) Writer

Since darkmark got me a look at these issues, I'll backtrack and fill in the pre-Gold Key Twilight Zone. They're published by Dell but produced, like the Gold Key run, by Western Publishing.

They're numbered 1173, 1288 (those two in the Four-Color numbering), then 01-860-207, and 12-860-210. The fourth issue is misnumbered 01-860-210 in the indicia. 01 stands for fifteen cents and 12 for twelve cents; the price on Dells had just dropped back to the industry standard at this point.

George Evans has said that he and Reed Crandall sometimes swapped some pencilling and inking on a story, but here I'm listing the artist I see doing the most on pencils or inks. Hearing that Frank Frazetta inked Evans on the fourth issue, I give him the credit on the stories that look least like Evans' own inks. On "Hard-Luck Harvey," Joe Giella, not known to have worked at Western, is a wild guess on my part; but does this give anyone a feeling of Fifties Strange Adventures/Mystery in Space déjà vu?

TZ 01-860-270 art: Joe Giella pencils?, Frank Giacoia inks

The second issue cover painting is by George Wilson. Someone else did the first; and another artist did, I believe, both the third and fourth issue paintings.

The Twilight Zone at Dell—Written by Leo Dorfman

Mar-May/61(#1) Specter of Youthp: Reed Crandall  i: George Evans
The Phantom Lighthousea: Crandall
Doom by Predictiona: Crandall
Feb-Apr/62(#2) The Bridegrooma: Evans
Secret Weapona: Evans
The Joinerp: Crandall  i: Evans
May-July/62(#3) The Man from Nowherep: Mike Sekowsky  i: Frank Giacoia
Beyond the Windowp:  Sekowsky  i: Giacoia
Hard-Luck Harveyp: Joe Giella  i: Giacoia
Aug-Oct/62(#4) The Ringp: Evans  i: Frank Frazetta
The Collectorp: Evans  i: Frazetta
The Time Machinea: Evans

Just possibly the fillers (1-pagers except for "Voices" in the second issue, a 2-pager), are by Dorfman, but they're more illustrated text than comics (no dialogue), which makes the style harder to pin down. I believe some issues here, on variants I haven't seen, have additional filler pages in place of back-cover ads.

The Twilight Zone Fillers at Dell—By an Unknown Writer

Mar-May/61(#1) Journey into the Twilight Zonea: Evans
Feb-Apr/62(#2) Voices from the Twilight Zonea: Evans
Voyage into the Twilight Zonea: Evans
Calling the Twilight Zonea: Evans
May-July/62(#3) Luck in the Twilight Zonep Sekowsky  i: Giacoia?
Lost in the Twilight Zonep Sekowsky  i: Giacoia?
Aug-Oct/62(#4) Creatures from the Twilight Zonea: Evans

Friday, December 30, 2011

Twilight Zone 1-10 writers

identical Rod Serling heads from TZ 3 stories, 'The Last Battle' and 'The Queen Is Dead'

This list indexes the writers of the first ten Gold Key issues of The Twilight Zone. There were four earlier issues, which I've yet to see, published by Dell in 1961-62; Gold Key restarted the numbering with #1.

Those cited by the Who's Who as writing mystery stories in the early Sixties for Western (which would include the Dell TZs, then Boris Karloff as well as TZ, at Gold Key) include Leo Cheney, Royal Cole, and Marshall McClintock. There are no specific stories they're known to have done, so I can't match up the unknown writers' styles with particular authors.

Technically one story in each issue is not a Twilight Zone; there's no logo, no appearance by Rod Serling, and the copyright owner is Western rather than the TV production company, Cayuga.

A stat of Rod Serling's head was used in any number of stories beginning with the third issue. Above, on the left, is the head's first appearance, in a Mike Sekowsky story—and I don't think the head itself is by Sekowsky—then, on the right, it's definitely a stat in an Alex Toth story. Below are two examples from Frank Thorne stories; in earlier ones, he got to draw Serling.

identical Rod Serling heads from TZ 10 stories, 'Lost Acre' and 'Demon Light'

The art attributions are on the Grand Comics Database.

The Twilight Zone Writers

Nov/62#1 Perilous Journey"TZ 1"
Do Not Touch Exhibit"TZ 1"
Voyage to NowhereLeo Dorfman
Feb/63#2 The Lost Colonie"TZ 2"
Journey into JeopardyDorfman
The Ray of PhobosDorfman
May/63#3 The Last Battle"TZ 2"
Birds of a Feather"TZ 2"
The Queen Is Dead—Long Live the Queen"TZ 2"
Aug/63#4 The Secret of the Key"TZ 2"
Experiment in Purple"TZ 2"
The Captive"TZ 2"
The Ordeal of Bluebird 3"TZ 2"
Nov/63#5 The Legacy of Hans BurkelDorfman
Poor Little SylvesterDorfman
The Shadow of FateDorfman
The Fortune HuntersDorfman
Feb/64#6 Captives of the MirageDick Wood
The Night People of LondonWood
The Last Sixty SecondsWood
May/64#7 The Shield of MedusaWood
The Menace from Out ThereWood
The Man Who Haunted HimselfWood
Aug/64#8 Hamilton's CreatureWood
The Night Striker of ParisWood
Iron Man No. 1"TZ 2"
Nov/64#9 The Street Where Evil DweltWood
The Doom Days    ?
Creatures on CanvasWood
Feb/65#10 The Bewitching WindowWood
Lost AcreWood
The Patient Workers *Wood
The Demon LightWood
The Mystic BookWood
The Midas Wheel *Wood
(* single-page stories)