In
his 1947 tome
Secrets
Behind the Comics Stan Lee shows
the
script layout in use at Timely--panel descriptions down the left-hand
side of the page, captions/dialogue down the right hand. It
seems like
extra work for the writer--figuring out the spacing needed to match up
the panels in the two columns--but certainly it would make
it easier for
the artist and letterer to focus on only what each needs.
It would also make it easier for the editor if he wants to keep the
panel descriptions from the original writer but for whatever reason get
a
second writer to replace the text. According to his records, Paul
S. Newman sold "His Brother's Keeper"
in
Wild
Western #8 to Timely. But from
the style, Ernie Hart wrote it. I would
figure
Newman's left-hand side of the script was used and then Hart did a
replacement right-hand side. (Occasionally Timely bought scripts for
ongoing
strips that weren't even "salvaged" like this--a good ten Captain
Americas from William Woolfolk,
per
his records, were paid for but then never published.)
Here's what makes me assign the final script of "His Brother's Keeper"
to Hart: "We pick up the trail again" in that story and then
in the Ant-Man story "Music to Scream By" in
Tales
to Astonish
47 (Sep/63), credited as H. E. Huntley. I'd be a touch less
than 100% certain only if I ever ran across Newman using the
authorial "we" anywhere.
UPDATE: Robin Snyder tells me he's deleting "His Brother's Keeper" from the Newman bibliography, as Paul S. Newman's earliest credits were reconstructed based on having the books in his files (for most of Newman's career, commencing soon after, his records contain much more corroborating material). "He advised me to delete any credit if there was the slightest doubt that it was his. He was aware that some writers also kept records and he preferred to give up any credit if he or I thought it possible he was mistaken."
Kid
Colt writers in All Western
Winners
Win/48-Apr/49 |
2-4 |
Kid
Colt stories |
E. H. Hart |
in Western
Winners
June/-Aug/49 |
5-6 |
Kid
Colt stories |
Hart |
in Best
Western
June/-Aug/49 |
58-59 |
Kid
Colt stories |
Hart |
in Wild
Western
Nov/48-Jan/49 |
4-5 |
Kid
Colt stories |
Hart |
May/
|
7 |
The
Curse of the Chinese Idol |
Hart (credited in sneak)
|
July/
|
8 |
His
Brother's Keeper |
plot: Paul S. Newman |
|
|
|
dialogue: Hart |
Oct/
|
9 |
The
End of the Trail |
Hart |
Feb/-Aug/52 |
20-23 |
Kid
Colt stories |
Leon Lazarus |
Oct/
|
24 |
Whip
Savage [2 parts] |
Hart |
Dec/52-Sep/53 |
25-29 |
Kid
Colt stories [2 each, 25-26] |
Lazarus |
Oct/
|
30 |
Justice
in His Holsters |
Hart |
Dec/53-Sep/57 |
31-57 |
Kid
Colt stories |
Joe Gill |
in Two-Gun
Kid
Nov/49 |
10 |
The
Hunter and the Hunted |
Hart |
June/54 |
14 |
[The
New Deputy] |
Gill |
Aug/
|
15 |
The
New Sheriff |
Lazarus |
Sep/54-Feb/55 |
16-21 |
Kid
Colt stories |
Gill |
in Two
Gun
Western
Aug/51-June/52 |
9-14 |
Kid
Colt stories |
Lazarus |
in Black
Rider
Jan/-Mar/55 |
26-27 |
Kid
Colt stories |
Gill |